BENNIELITO AND HIS TWO FRONT TEETH By 6yrs. old Sophia

From Grandma; When Sophia dictated to me the story below, I thought all along that the whole idea came from her mind, but then, a day after I posted her story on my blog,  she showed me a book with this title "Benito and his two front teeth by Augie and Mark Rivera", and so  I told her it is not right to copy the ideas of other people. She said some of the ideas in her story are her's.  So the story below is not entirely Sophia's.  Nevertheless, I still find it amazing that a six year old can make something like a synopsis of the story that she has just read.

I've read the book of the Rivera's and indeed, as Sophia told me, some of the ideas in her story below are hers; the ending for one is different. While the Rivera's ended their story with a Museum of Benito's sculptor, Sophia ended her story with Bennielito making a playground with his teeth to the delight of the children. Sophia said that since the story is for children, the ending should be happiness for children and not a museum for adults.

Btw, Sophia's Lolo's name is Benvienido, must be the reason why she retained the name Ben.


BENNIELITO AND HIS TWO FRONT TEETH
THERE  WAS ONCE A WOMAN WHO GAVE BIRTH TO A CHILD 
BUT WHEN THE CHILD CAME OUT
ALL THE PEOPLE LAUGH AND LAUGH AND LAUGH , THEY COULD NOT RESIST THEIR LAUGHING
BECAUSE THE CHILD THAT THE WOMAN GAVE BIRTH TO, HAS TWO FRONT TEETH

AND THE MAMA NAMED THE BOY BENNIELITO.
BUT THE BOY IS VERY SAD 
BECAUSE NO ONE WANTS TO TAKE CARE OF HIM
LUCKILY, THERE ONCE WAS A KIND COUPLE THAT TAKE CARE OF THE BOY
AND THE BOY GREW UP AND GREW UP AND GREW UP
UNTIL HE HAD TO LEAVE THE COUPLE AND FIND  A NEW JOB

THEN HE WENT TO THE CHURCH
BUT IN THE CHURCH, THE PRIEST 
AND THE PEOPLE IN THE CHURCH KEEPS ON LAUGHING
AND LAUGHING AND LAUGHING 
BECAUSE OF BENNIELITO’S TWO FRONT TEETH
HIS TEETH WAS 5 INCHES LONG !

AND THEN HE FOUND A NEW JOB, ABOUT RIDING A HORSE
BUT WHEN HE WAS GOING TO RIDE THE HORSE
THE HORSE STARTED LAUGHING, NHEEEE ! NHEEEE ! NHEEEEE !
THOSE TWO FRONT TEETH LOOK LIKE RABBIT’S TEETH, NHEEEEE !
SO HE DIDN’T GET ANY JOB
SO HE WENT TO A DARK PLACE WHERE NO ONE WAS THERE TO LAUGH AT HIM

AND  THEN HE SAW A TURNIP AND  HE NIBBLED ON THE TURNIP
THEN HE SAW A BEAUTIFUL SWAN
A SCULPTURE OF A BEAUTIFUL SWAN
HE WAS SO AMAZED OF WHAT HIS TWO FRONT TEETH COULD DO
SO BENNEILITO BUILT A STORE OF  SCULPTURES
AND HE MADE A PLAYGROUND FOR KIDS OUT OF A TURNIP
AND THE CHILDREN WERE HAPPY


THE END!







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